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Just Another Love Song

Contributed by Karlee14 on Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 06:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I'm sorry
I don't feel okay
The world around me
Is starting to decay
And I'm sorry
I don't feel that way
The path in front of me
Is leading a stray

If this is just another love song
Why do I feel like letting go?
If it's just another day long
Why is the sun so low?

You can say that I'm a dreamer
But the only dream I had was you
You can portray I've become insaner
But hiding is the only thing I see through

I'm losing
All these stupid games
I'm playing
Them all in promised shame
I think
You're the one to blame
So why
Are you getting all the fame

If this is just another love song
Why won't you stand up and admit you're wrong?
If this is just another romance story
Why can't you say you're sorry?

You can say I'm a dreamer
But the only dream I had was you
You can say I've become insaner
But hiding is the only thing I see through

If
You're Prince Charming
Why
Am I the ugly duckling?
If
You're mistakes are learning
Why
Am I the one burning?

You can portray I'm a dreamer
But the only dream was us
You can say that it's just another heart breaker
Turning ardency to lust
If I'm supposed to love you forever
Why is forgetting you a must?

Just another love song
Let me be
Just another romance gone wrong
Set me free

Copyright © Karlee14 ... [ 2007-09-16 18:38:34]
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Re: Just Another Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 17th September 2007 @ 08:02:24 AM AEST
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I think this started and ended really well. I love how it ends, those few lines are the best in the song, I think, and the start kept me interested, so well done.

I did like the middle, but personally, I can only read the word 'dreamer' so many times.

But, otherwise, I liked it.

Well done.

Phil xxx

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