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What my little boy said
Contributed by
sandypoet
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Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 12:56:16 PM in AEST
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I look at him with love,
So much that he needs,
He looks at me with a question,
He says, Answer me please.
He said mom,
Do you remember what you said,
About the pictures in the clouds,
That God gave a sketch pad to the kids,
The one's who have died.
I said, I remember the story,
As I looked into his eyes.
I could see the tears behind his little lids,
But not one failed and I wondered why,
But listen to this.
He said moma,
I wish Granny would write me a note,
And I could see it in the sky,
I wish she would too, son,
Then I wanted to cry.
I asked him what would he want her to write,
What would you like to see,
He answered then so quietly.
I love you Dylan,
Love Granny.
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Re: What my little boy said
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 01:43:57 PM AEST
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| A tender write this. One that caught my wandering eye. I guess because I am in some mentations of late thinking of my regrets. One of which is never expressing my love for my late departed dad. I feel the inklings of this write..missing the ones who have gone...and perhaps missing what we could have said and done..or vice-versa...I too wish for a sketch pad in the skies...for both my self to write and to hear the messages from the other side.. oh well...a touching tender write. One that evokes some thoughts within. |
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Re: What my little boy said
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by Kie-Kie on
Monday, 17th September 2007 @ 03:50:16 AM AEST
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Oh Sandy *hugs* I hope your little boy's doing ok. Losing a grandparent is hard.
Beautiful write hun. It brought tears to my eyes at the very end.
love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: What my little boy said
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 01:32:45 AM AEST
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| Aww, this poem is very sweet. |
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