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Let Me Out
Contributed by
ed
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Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Let me out
And shut the door.
I feel I have nothing to live for.
Theres nothing wrong apart fom me,
Please people, leave me be.
Let me out
And LOCK the door.
I cant face it anymore.
Let me wash away into the sea.
I'm sorry, it's just me.
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ed
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2003-03-04 21:00:00]
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Percursors on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:17:01 PM AEST
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| GOOD write... |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:12:14 PM AEST
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| I know theres times you want to shut things out I do Try to face your problems face on! Christina |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:17:53 AM AEST
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| it'll all be ok...i love your poem... |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 04:34:50 AM AEST
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| short, simple but effective - i know i've felt like this, like you just wanna close the door on the rest of the world and disintegrate or something. excellent write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 02:34:26 AM AEST
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Ed, This is a very common feeling very succinctly put. We've all been there. Please excuse another commercial but I think the reason for this feeling is that there are too many of us. Try my poem "Restrain your Parents" for a possible solution.
Enjoyed that one, On to your next....... |
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Re: Let Me Out
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:52:45 AM AEST
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| Everyone has something to live for. I don't care what people say everyone has something to live for |
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