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i die alone
Contributed by
10_000days
on
Saturday, 15th September 2007 @ 11:33:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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my head it throbs.
the pain wont stop.
the love alive.
i hear your voice, it rings aloud.
i wait alone the time has passed.
eternity, i died alone.
my love it lasts, and it wont go,
there all the same
there just not you
there all like her
and her and her
then theres you, among the stars
alive alone, beside that empty man
the pain wont stop, ill let it live
for it brings hope just one last time
your voice.
one last time, beneath the stars i am alive,
till then i die alone.
LOVE SUCKS
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Re: i die alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 04:32:39 AM AEST (User
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I can sense youe pain within your poem.Yes,love can give you wings to fly ,or break your wings and make you fall from a high..Love can hurt so much,but we can learn from its lessons and become stronger through its many processes.Very sad and well written poem. |
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