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Closing Time
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
on
Friday, 14th September 2007 @ 11:33:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You’re dead to me,
I guess you see,
Removed from my list,
No faltered words,
No scene absurd,
Nor a parting of the lips.
For all it’s worth,
I loved you dear,
My heart did flutter for,
Though you’ll never see,
I hope this be,
The closing of our door.
Copyright ©
shinji_kusa
... [
2007-09-14 11:33:30]
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Re: Closing Time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th September 2007 @ 08:24:40 AM AEST
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very, very awesome - i truly loved it. great metaphors here...beautiful.
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Re: Closing Time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 03:42:46 AM AEST
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| Great poem! i can totally relate, i'm going through a similar situation. anyways, loved the poem! |
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