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Her
Contributed by
broken_cookie
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Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 10:20:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i'm in her shadow
cant escape
i want out
why cant you just hate her?
i feel like you're ashamed
or maybe you want her more
i know she was thr first
but im here now
i want those special things
like a kiss goodbye
or an "i love you"
look into my eyes and tell me
that you're not thinking of her
i know i can be good for you
but i cant if you wont let me
when will you be done with her?
i dont wana wait forever
id rather have you now...
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Re: Her
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 14th September 2007 @ 02:59:37 PM AEST
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Ah, the young female...
such a silly heart...
the truest love you'll ever find is found in the eyes of a dog.
we all have our hangups child, doesn't ever get easier...
may your life be merciful toward you,
always, abraham |
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Re: Her
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by amitos on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 08:59:35 AM AEST
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that was still a plain poem ... i'm sure u can still improve .
but the essential is that u get ur feelings out... and thats good |
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