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Disbelief
Contributed by
nicksta
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Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 10:10:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To fall downwards the problem, goes beside
Arms pushed outwards to slow your slide
Hope speaks softly in your ear
“ Don’t worry this is nothing to fear”
But gravity speaks louder so you’ll understand
As your nails crack like mica, under the force of your hands
Tension builds within your stomach
God goes silent, at the true summit
An while pondering the advantages of letting go
All decisions come slow
Desperation is now what you’ve become, flooding all that your minds overcome
Raising your arms you begin to stutter
“ I’ll thank myself for all I’ve done,
forgive for all sinful fun,
an pardon with the sun dried grief deep within myself “
Looking upwards at the sky for the very last time
You laugh in disbelief of what you’ve overcome
An you’ve stopped falling
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nicksta
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2007-09-13 10:10:06]
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Re: Disbelief
(User Rating: 1 )
by broken_cookie on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 10:22:41 AM AEST
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| i really enjoyed reading this...its very well written.. |
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Re: Disbelief
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by amitos on
Tuesday, 18th September 2007 @ 08:54:40 AM AEST
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| its quite funny with a great sense of humour in a very dramatical situation... keep going ... thats very nice |
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