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Young Ursula Part 2
Contributed by
lowman613
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Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
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Young Ursula running leaving her family behind,
remembering all her father told her to do,
having his words etched in her mind,
shes scared, tierd and weak trying to make it through,
Knowing she had to reach the great wall,
for the communist soldiers are comming fast,
getting down on the ground,in a low crawl,
for the soldiers with guns she had to get past,
Digging for hours trying to make a hole,
big enough for her to get out,
Timing things just right,with the light pole,
and the soldiers that did the turn about,
The lights were off her so she decided to go,
Under bob wired fence she went,
trying to be quiet & doing it slow,
getting hooked up on a wire that was bent,
Trying to break her way free,
pulling on her coat to give way,
not wanting the soldiers to see,
all she did was start to pray,
Just than she was spotted by the light,
they started to shoot and shout at her,
she was pulling harder to get out of site,
Everything became a blur,
She was hit in the back,when she finally rolled free,
rolling on to the Western side,
laying there still where she bleed,
being strong yet she still cried,
Laying in a ditch waiting to die,
American soldiers came to her rescue,
thank goodness they had drove by,
like angels dressed in blue,
She was safe from harm,would her parents know,
remembering all her father had to say,
she knew than where she wanted to go,
taking a boat to the freedom of USA!
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2003-03-04 19:00:00]
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Re: Young Ursula Part 2
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 08:55:07 PM AEST
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| Christina, this is quite a story, how wonderful your parents shared this with you, its a great memory to pass on to your kids, hope there's another part, nicely written, thanks so much for sharing this, Hugs Val |
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Re: Young Ursula Part 2
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:05:54 PM AEST
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Sigh..I'm just glad your'e alive to tell this story!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Young Ursula Part 2
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by Heavenangel on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:38:23 PM AEST
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Christina,sounds like your mother had a tough life,proud to be an american,you captured her story well!
~HeavenAngel~ |
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Re: Young Ursula Part 2
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:23:44 AM AEST
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| well drawn. it is a live story.. skilled write. venkat |
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Re: Young Ursula Part 2
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:22:51 PM AEST
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Thank God, your mother escaped! A wonderful ending.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Young Ursula Part 2
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 05:55:22 PM AEST
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very good write my fiend and a good tribute to your mothers courage.
Shari |
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Re: Young Ursula Part 2
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:57:15 PM AEST
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| awww, i've read so much about these times, i believe every word, every line etched with the pain of that war, i hope you write a part three, i am hooked, please say there is a part three, and let us know how she made her early way, damn i have tears in my eyes, much love, nessa |
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