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That Kiss
Contributed by
StoneAngel
on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 03:53:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The way that you corress me
is like water gently flowing
over my entire body
it tingles at you touch
I shiver with extacy
Your kiss is like
carimel melting in my mouth
my whole body just
shivers with excitement
and melts at your touch
At that moment I am yours
and you are mine
There is nothing
in this world except
you and I
At that moment
I fell in love
But now I am not
so sure of how I feel
My emotions are confusing
it feels like a whir wind
Inside my body
tugging at my very soul
at my very core
That Kiss told me
Everything there is
to know about you
and more
Sincerly,
Laina Peper
Copyright ©
StoneAngel
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2007-09-12 15:53:14]
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Re: That Kiss
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by Adreana on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 03:23:18 AM AEST
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Mmmmmm.... a kiss can say so much. Amazing, isn't it? Very nice write. Good luck with your new fella!
~Adreana |
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Re: That Kiss
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by Adreana on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 03:23:23 AM AEST
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Mmmmmm.... a kiss can say so much. Amazing, isn't it? Very nice write. Good luck with your new fella!
~Adreana |
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Re: That Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 04:50:54 AM AEST
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Great descriptions!
The fourth stanza bothers me a bit as it seems to clash with the sixth. But otherwise you defininatly take the reader with you right there, at that moment...very sweet. |
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