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Green Ballon
Contributed by
Dimes
on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 09:09:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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A green balloon
free
unburdened
Drifts through its existence
unnoticed.
Copyright ©
Dimes
... [
2007-09-12 09:09:10] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Green Ballon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 01:18:13 PM AEST (User
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short but imaginative. Very creative write
keep writing
keep smiling
sweetstranger |
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Re: Green Ballon
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 05:01:43 AM AEST (User
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Not bad at all...rather imaginative.
You might like to try your hand at a Haiku. |
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