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The strength of a Bond
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 11th September 2007 @ 11:43:24 AM in AEST
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they touched each others hands
looking down both knew it was there
a feel that had not been there in ages
both scared and shy
drawn together by a single touch
one that had been longed for ...forever
this one would be nothing like before
it would bring and connect them
a connection so strong
not even a bad word could stop them
this time it would last for eternity
nothing stopping them
no one stopping them
just two souls that would form a bond
making an ever lasting... LIFE
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Re: The strength of a Bond
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Tuesday, 11th September 2007 @ 11:53:05 AM AEST
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SOUNDS TO ME LIKE YOU FINALLY MET SOMEONE NICE ,HOPE IT GOES GOOD FOR YOU .VERY NICELY DONE IT WAS ALMOST LIKE A PORNO GOING OFF IN MY HEAD LOL J/K DAYNA
LOVE YA BABE
SCOTT |
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Re: The strength of a Bond
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 11th September 2007 @ 10:27:05 PM AEST
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Brew,
Damn, is this not every sister's fantasy....to find the "one". This was a lovely piece. The ending lines were fantastic.
"just two souls that would form a bond
making an ever lasting...LIFE"
Nicely penned.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: The strength of a Bond
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 02:10:27 AM AEST
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Yeah...I think we all long for that type of connection.
Great piece! |
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Re: The strength of a Bond
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by StoneAngel on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 03:37:12 PM AEST
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| very interesting, my first thought of was of an old friend of mine, the second was of sex because of the last line. very imaginative. good work. |
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Re: The strength of a Bond
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th September 2007 @ 06:17:41 AM AEST
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As lovely as ever, meaningfull to the core . . .
bjps |
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