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Perfect
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
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Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 06:33:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You see my flaws
And you love all but 1 of them
I hate myself
But you love me enough for the both of us
I see myself as fat and ugly
Except when in your arms
Your eyes tell me you love me
You hands tell me you could never hurt me
Your kiss tells me you could never give up on me
The way you love me tells me its unconditional
When you hug me I feel safe in your arms
When you speak I melt at your words
You are amazing
And just about perfect
And you make me just about perfect too.
Baby
I love you.
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Re: Perfect
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by Jay_ne3 on
Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 06:50:54 AM AEST
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| it is a really cute love poem. Not over done and mushy. Its really good. |
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Re: Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 09:33:07 AM AEST
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done straight to the point and with a beautiful eloquence.
It is an amazing thing ... finding someone who loves you E X A C T L Y
as you are ~
There is simplicity in this. And I think it's the simplicity that
makes it so entirely exquisite. Beautiful work. :)
~Breezy |
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Re: Perfect
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by wordsy on
Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 10:10:42 PM AEST
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Simple words in radiant splendor.
Nicely done.
as always,
wordsy. |
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Re: Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th September 2007 @ 05:44:41 AM AEST
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This says so much more than "I love you"
I like the extra thoughts without the obvious words. |
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