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Symathize

Contributed by Forgotten_soul on Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 03:12:29 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Don't wanna think about it
don't wanna talk about

don't even tell me
how far away we are

Please just let me stay here
cold and alone
in my little hole

maybe This puzzle is missing some pieces
the pieces I gave to you

and everyone else I loved
I loved enough to leave

Lying away
Because I never wanna face that bullet
and take it from you

waking up in my bed
where I tell myself I'm not alone

maybe I'm Sick of the whispers
that tell me I'm missing my chance

The prayers that I barely hear

I'm still telling them
I don't know what what I'm waiting for

Still dying little by little
as I lie here waiting for it

So sick of faith
and believing in something that isn't there

Maybe this is everything
maybe this is it

Because I'm still here.

Copyright © Forgotten_soul ... [ 2007-09-10 03:12:29]
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Re: Symathize (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th September 2007 @ 05:49:41 AM AEST
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Interesting title. Did you mean Sympathize?
If so, its almost in contrast to the content of the poem....yet I find it more as depth rather than distraction.
It makes me wonder...think...about the piece...and thats a good thing!

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