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To Err Was I,
Contributed by
RLWildPassions
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Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 09:35:12 PM in AEST
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To err was I, did I believe,
Where in my heart, did I deceive?
Was not my being, but one soul,
Ripened early, no single poll?
And, when it was, that I did die,
Was, what was there, where I did lie?
Within a shell, nothing remained,?
To err was I, what had I gained?
RLD
08, September, 2007
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Re: To Err Was I,
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by yackerz85 on
Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 12:02:14 PM AEST
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This poem has awesome flow and rhyme to it. It smoothly rolls off the tongue when it is read out loud. Really good job on this one.
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Re: To Err Was I,
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by RLWildPassions on
Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 02:45:02 AM AEST
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Thank You Yackerz85: and yet; no wondering at rehearse??? betwixt FAQ, the blame, the bust ;be -een or doubt??..!!
RaquelLeahDuPont
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