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The Moments

Contributed by loyalist on Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 11:33:20 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

She never saw me around her
she never saw me at all

She never knew if I was dead
because she never knew me at all

but let me hold you in my arms
read between the lines again
because I was willing to be around you
but now this moment is gone

She never gets my phone calls
because I never call

She never hears me whispering
Because I said nothing at all

but let me hold you in my arms
read between the lines again
because I was willing to be around you
but now this moment is gone

Sometimes you dont say what you think
sometimes you dont even talk at all]
but Im to blame
I know its me
its me

I overheard that your homesick
since you have been away from home

I know its just part of your tricks
to leave me here all alone

but let me hold you in my arms
read between the lines again
because I was willing to be around you
but now this moment is gone

Copyright © loyalist ... [ 2007-09-08 11:33:20]
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Re: The Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 04:53:10 AM AEST
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This is a good piece, filled with longing. The latter two lines of the chorus are maybe just a little weak, seemingly not as good words-to-meaning ratio. But all around, good work.

Andrew

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