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A mornings word 090707
Contributed by
wordsy
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Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 03:31:58 AM in AEST
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Written by the hand of innocents
through the eyes of ignorance
Thoughts in mind, so naïve
to wisdoms side is lent
Held in kind by worded woe
for sadness sorry sake
Left to plunder the depths so low
as dealt in life by fate
And tears brought forth by loneliness
so seem to ever flow
Caught up in sorrow’s shade
where only the lonely know
That held in time, are the memories
though faded some by years
And washed in those long now dried
the countless, endless tears
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wordsy
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2007-09-08 03:31:58]
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Re: A mornings word 090707
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by Moonshine on
Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 06:53:45 AM AEST
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| Another very nice write. I love reading your work, it flows perfectly and the messages are always so touching. Nice job. |
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Re: A mornings word 090707
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 10:24:44 AM AEST
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My goodness wordsy ... this seemed so solemn to me. I could
actually picture you sitting at the kitchen table staring out the
rain splattered window; a view of the forest in front of you. A
hot cup of coffee's steam rising in the air as you gather up pen
in hand and cast these words to the page.
Damn fine writing here. This line just kept repeating in my head
for some untellable reason ...
"where only the lonely know"
where only the lonely know ...
where only the lonely know ...
where only the lonely know ...
where only-
damn. It's as if you crawled inside my very own soul to
capture this thought. Excellent write, my friend. As always.
~Breezy
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Re: A mornings word 090707
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by Dom on
Friday, 14th September 2007 @ 09:54:38 PM AEST
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I love how Breezy has interpreted this, the image she had in her mind seems so perfect and complementary to the gravity of your words. It always amazes me what depth can be conveyed in so few words, and this feels the same.
Eventually I will get round to reading all of these 'morning's words', I find them an interesting insight into your thoughts, and I like the idea of a collection of poetic thoughts from moments.
Lovely!
Dom |
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