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SILENT walk......
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 12:43:53 PM in AEST
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she cries
she tries so hard
how can she make
how can she break
how can she make known
its all on the line
with out any words to be drawn
so take what you see
and give her more than glee
she will walk blind
yet take what you hide
so dont falter in anything
for she knows what is known
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brew
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2007-09-07 12:43:53]
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Re: SILENT walk......
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by endlesspath on
Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 12:02:21 PM AEST
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it seems you have done both
falling and maybe self failed
whytho
what have you failed in or fell in
maybe its not what you have done maybe what has been done to you
sorry its seems powerless to do either
keep your head up and smile
life can bring wonders
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Re: SILENT walk......
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 10:36:14 AM AEST
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sweetie where have you been??
missed you. And wow! This was really well written hun!
(maybe your best yet)
There is a soft innocence here, but also a strong conviction.
But all and in everything, very emotional.
Wonderful write, Dayna. Hope you're doing okay.
*hugs you tight*
~Breezy |
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Re: SILENT walk......
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 12:41:35 PM AEST
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But she still walks, she doesn't let the world keep her down.
Take care,
David |
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