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Just a guy
Contributed by
Dreama
on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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he sits for hours alone with a computer and a phone
messing with little jobs in a world of his own
ready and waiting for someone to talk to
enjoys the feeling when they come on and do
living in isolation from people and friends
becomes excited when the lonliness ends
always starts the conversations with 'hi, how r u?'
followed by the almost habitual 'whats new?'
'fine' they said 'nothing much, u?'
at which point he admits he is feeling blue
he opens up but theres nothing to do
so changes the topic 'what r u up 2?'
sometimes hours or seconds they last.
in his opinion, always over too fast.
conversations with friends dramatically affect his mood
deciding if hell be happy or sad, so laugh or just brood
and then hes alone again, left to his thoughts
about his life, the future and his past.
Copyright ©
Dreama
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2003-03-04 15:40:00]
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Re: Just a guy
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:27:27 PM AEST
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| Being lonely is tough at times,This guy needs a friend! Good write! Christina |
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Re: Just a guy
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by wolfflow on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:20:39 PM AEST
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| nice poem, love to hear what his thoughts were like or about |
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Re: Just a guy
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:04:27 PM AEST
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| this is great, love when a poem shows a life..like seeing through a window to the soul..welcome to ypdc too:) |
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Re: Just a guy
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 11:53:37 AM AEST
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I know that feeling...way too much sometimes
Good write!! :) |
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