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Moments
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Thursday, 6th September 2007 @ 11:19:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Can I
hold this moment
in time
Can I
keep it all to
myself
Dwell not anywhere
no....no where else
Be lost
in the moment
simply sucked
through a vortex
Standing
in one place
Looking on
to the next...
8/07
Laura Howell Horner
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
... [
2007-09-06 23:19:08]
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Re: Moments
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by reprobate on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 07:30:50 AM AEST
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If only dear lady, if only...
thank you for sharing, yet again. |
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Re: Moments
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 11:47:02 AM AEST
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I swear sometimes I'm want to snatch them [right out of the air, you know... as if they were just floating there like a cloud waiting for someone to dare to just grab them] up in my hand and hold them so very, very tight so that I never have to let them go..........
Moments. yeh.
Laura, hun? To answer the question that you opened with here....
I think you just did.
~Snem
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Re: Moments
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by shelby on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 03:38:49 PM AEST
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Damn good here sis.... yes if for but the moment....... cant say much more for now than that..
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Moments
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by zenith66 on
Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 06:48:44 PM AEST
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short and sweeeeet, this is very well done,
so much to think about in such a short write,
thats hard to do,
and you captured the moment perfectly..
well done!!
zenith66 |
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Re: Moments
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 11:00:23 AM AEST
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Oh sis .. damn. This was exceptional!!
There are so many moments I would hold indefinitely, if
only we could. Experiencing this, is surely one of them.
The pic you chose to put with this is perfect.
I think you've inspired me to write .. (and THAT is a
beautiful thing; when you can inspire another with your
words, to go and seek their own. Damn, hun. I LOVE this!!)
Wonderful work. Very sigh inducing ..
peace, love and hugs
~em gee |
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Re: Moments
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 04:39:57 AM AEST
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mmmmmm yeah.............
How often have we all wished this. Now all we have left is the memory.....and if we are lucky enough....a poem. |
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Re: Moments
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by Spike on
Saturday, 15th September 2007 @ 10:41:03 PM AEST
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wow. This one sent shivers through me. Lots of profound existential thought wrapped in a pure desire of moment. Structured and worded just right.
S. |
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Re: Moments
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by Whisper on
Friday, 12th October 2007 @ 04:33:57 AM AEST
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I like this . It held in its simple words how I feel today . Thanks for sharing
Whisper
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