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Invocation
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 6th September 2007 @ 02:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Invocation
Arms wide
head high
blank eyes
to sun-stripped sky
I cry…
“I invoke thee Words Of Reason”
Oh Compassion, I entreat thee
Won’t you venture forth to meet me?
~
I do not seek to be demanding
Guide my head, my heart, my hand
Bestow patient understanding
Upon the shoulders of this man
Let my thoughts flow forth unjaded
My reply, let sound sincere
Somewhere there beyond this madness
May sanity then persevere
Logic does not seem cohesive
There is no simple place to start
What words befit a man who has
Abandoned post of heart?
And what to say of blood
And honor, duty, and the rest?
Should I tell him where he failed,
That another passed the test?
As I conjure Comprehension,
I implore now earnestly…
Of my greatest apprehension,
I wish, not like him, to be.
Knees bent
voice spent
soul rent
each word was meant
consent…
“I invoke you, Words Of Wisdom”
~ Nazmythian ~
( even still, struggling with a surprise e-mail )
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Re: Invocation
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 6th September 2007 @ 10:44:52 PM AEST
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A very powerful write. May these words from your heart be an answered prayer for all that you ask. I do not know the struggle but I do know you have strength to pass through this.
You are a warrior who has asked for all the right weapons to do your battle. Peace Naz. |
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Re: Invocation
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 01:38:56 AM AEST
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| Naz, This poem is very deep. I read it first then a second time. May you find the peace that your words suggest you are seeking. Greetings from bern |
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Re: Invocation
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 11:55:04 AM AEST
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Naz,
I remember the previous post. I am pretty much at a loss for words, this was a fine piece of writing. You can feel the tug of your emotions, throughout this. I can't imagine what you're going through, I will say I wish you peace in this personal struggle.
Hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Invocation
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by shelby on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 03:35:37 PM AEST
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I think I need to look back and read the ones Iv missed in my mind mess of late..
This is deep, powerful and moving.. along with many other things I cant describe.
As always your work works right into the soul of the one who reads it my friend.......
throws roses
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Invocation
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 07:57:56 PM AEST
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Hang tuff, my friend, with writing like this you'll get where ever you need to go.
Incredible work as always.
Keep the faith and keep writing.
big huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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