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Look at me
Contributed by
dreama
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Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look at me, the man with differnt stories to tell to everyone.
With differnt aspects of the whole available to each;
one side work, multiple sides love, no sides passion!
Only live life in dreams... Cant unravel all.
Mindless drone, on emotional roller coster
with no end in sight and no change to be had.
Unhappiness as constant companion, but always alone.
Fraustration, misery, dejection, loneliness!
Optimism fleeting, must remember rules of life:
only the bad will be happy, good are punished.
We live as life should be, to show it was it can be!
Wont give up, will keep holding on, new opertunities just around the corner
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dreama
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2003-03-04 15:20:00]
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Re: Look at me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:24:30 PM AEST
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| Life can confuse us at times well done on this peice! Christina |
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Re: Look at me
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 04:21:57 PM AEST
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| beautiful, powerful, passionate - excellent poem, keep them coming! welcome to ypdc. hope to read more of your work soon, Kate x |
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