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Still Searching
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 04:14:15 AM in AEST
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Ive been searching for myself since I was a kid. I finally found myself then I went and hid. Now im back on the hunt, looking everywhere. I put on a fake smile and act as if I dont care.
If you find me help me Im lost again. I search for myself through liquid sin. Am I good, am I evil, a human, or a demon? Is it pain, is it anger, is it sorrow that I lend?
I could be crowded and feel lonely, I beg not to but into my thoughts I flee. Ill search for who I am until the day I die, I hope to everything I dont find my life to be a lie.
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Re: Still Searching
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by Whatsername on
Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 06:12:07 AM AEST
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| Excellent job!! Very deep imagery Great work!! |
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Re: Still Searching
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 07:41:02 AM AEST
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This made me feel very protective of the writer ... sad but good ...
nice work
Dee xx |
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Re: Still Searching
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by Jenn2004 on
Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 11:46:36 PM AEST
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| I hope u find yourself, im still lost!! |
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