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Incomplete!
Contributed by
madhusudan
on
Tuesday, 4th September 2007 @ 02:52:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In my school's campus
where childhood love blooms
I met this beautiful girl
Oh how happy I was...
And as i spoke to her
My lips trembled so...
And as we finally fell in love...
I cried while kissing her...
Now she's gone and I wish I could see her
To ask her if she still loves me
And tell her that my heart aches!
coz life without her...
seems so incomplete!
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madhusudan
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2007-09-04 14:52:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Incomplete!
(User Rating: 1 ) by inlovewithaladd on
Tuesday, 4th September 2007 @ 04:20:36 PM AEST (User
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