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Is It Over?
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Monday, 3rd September 2007 @ 09:35:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Like the striking vipers hiss
is the energy of a false lovers kiss.
The toxic poison is defused,
and is released so as to confuse.
Disillusionment extinguishes the flame of desire,
and the embers eventually turn cold and expire.
Sadness permeates my being,
and strong emotions are conceived.
Not for the loss of my partner, I grieve.
Rather for the termination of a relationship, I had perceived.
Many times I looked into your eyes,
and saw only your deceit and lies.
How many disappointments did you expect me to bear?
The reciprocal balance was never fair.
You had an excuse for everything.
There seemed nothing accomplished by arguing.
I feel so betrayed and hurt,
but I'm tired of groveling in the dirt.
It amazes me that you were so shocked,
when I announced to you that our relationship, I dropped.
You had no insight whatsoever,
as to why I would not want this to last forever.
Problem is you wanted an obedient puppy dog to cuddle and play,
unfortunately I wanted a mate with whom to share my days.
The fact it's over does not cause me to be downhearted,
in that it never really got started.
Although some things were initiated,
I eventually became totally alienated.
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2007-09-03 09:35:45]
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Re: Is It Over?
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 3rd September 2007 @ 11:25:16 AM AEST
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Wow Will, this is extremely powerful and having lost more than once at love, I can so relate to some of these feelings you've displayed. Well written, my friend. Love lost is sooooo painful.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Is It Over?
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 04:43:05 PM AEST
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The story of my life, smiles.
Very painfull write and I too can relate many times.
huggs, strength,
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