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Good-night
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 31st August 2007 @ 04:15:36 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I try...
Not to let you fill thoughts
its hard not to let you come in,
"that need to let the heart melt.
If our lives never cross
You are a promise,
I have danced through clouds..
dreamed you.
In that gentleness
I lay warm
love is bound to join hearts.
Here.. between dreams
and every star.. I will wander
good-night my love...where ever you are. Vincent
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2007-08-31 16:15:36]
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Re: Good-night
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by shelby on
Friday, 31st August 2007 @ 04:25:56 PM AEST
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You said so much with this hun......
I cant even bring into light the right words to express the feeling and thought that comes to life while reading this......
huge hugs and thanks for being here!
You always manage to pull me up and hold me tight right when its needed the most.
hugssss
peaceful dreams with stardust and magic
Michelle |
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Re: Good-night
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 05:33:06 AM AEST
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Like a pumping heart or a sigh of calm ,the words dance about and warm you inside out.
Like a lullabye from a distant lover...that finally reached your ears. So well done my friend as always. |
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Re: Good-night
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 04:18:21 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful write, Vincent...it evoked such warm feelings and gentle thoughts.
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: Good-night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th October 2007 @ 09:42:22 PM AEST
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Vincent, I'm so sorry I missed this one. (You snuck it in here with naught
a word, you bad boy)
wow. This is such a beautiful and honest and REAL piece. Omigosh
how I KNOW what this feels like and it is a torture and a dream at the same
time.
.. between dreams
and every star.. I will wander
DAMN! That is just too beautiful for words! And I am akin to this
emotion, my friend. The human race is hopelessly doomed ....
*love this*
~Breezy |
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Re: Good-night
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 02:18:21 PM AEST
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Very beautifull-n-tender.
Swwweettt.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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