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I Killed Her with Kindness
Contributed by
allidoiswrite82
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Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 07:05:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I killed her with kindness
it started simply with the opening of doors
ending letters with mi amor
romantic trips to the shore
but now none of that matters anymore!
Because I killed her with kindness
My chivalry caused her blindness
I infected her with my kisses
and tainted her blood with a taste of what bliss is
injected her with 60cc of the opposite of malicious
and still we remain in two completely different abyss'
I find myself cursing love for being oh so vicious
When all I've been is virtuous
My chocolates caused her throat to clot
and even when swallowed her stomach would knot
I tattooed her name underlined with a dot
renovated my heart and volunteered to her this permanent spot
Eternally I ask is this what love is
to be tortured and tormented for killing her with kindness
I showered her with gifts
indulged her love for fantasy garden nymphs
My love caused her death
I gave until there was nothing left
listened until my ears grew deaf
and thats when she started to scream
but unable to hear I slept until I began dreamed
that love was finally what it seemed
And when I awoke she was still
willingly succumbing to my will
her blood could retain no trill
and my heart froze over
convinced of my own exposer
never again will I attempt to love another woman
regardless of what I told you
Now the only diagnosis and my given hypothesis
is that this beautiful woman succumb to kindness
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2007-08-30 07:05:03]
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Re: I Killed Her with Kindness
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 07:12:12 AM AEST
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a lot of emotion in this
good write
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Re: I Killed Her with Kindness
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by Moonshine on
Friday, 31st August 2007 @ 03:57:39 AM AEST
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| Good write. The flow kept me interested. |
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