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My last wish for you
Contributed by
whatsername
on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 05:30:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When all else fails and degrades
In your bilssfully perfect life
When the ones you love leave you
And cause you endless misery and strife
Remember my blue eyes and cold face
And this warm and reasuring smile
And never let anguishing pain enter
Where love for you once did compile
Although we ended our passion and love
And i now know it will never rekindle again
I still want you to remember
All of my last wishes for you, ending our amen
Forget my bold and annoying flaws
And hold close my better half
For a part of me remains forever in your soul
And let it live in your every laugh
Broken pieces of my feeble heart
Continue to stab my soft and frozen flesh
Leaving a permanent reminder on me
A wound that will forever remain fresh
As years go by in your long and joyful life
Dont let our past go far astray
Open your mind and let my memory out
For I am here for you when all is grey
I know you hate my lonley soul
And want to forget our conflicting lives
But i am here for you forever
When those girls cant see your love and recognize
I lay here torn apart and dead
Never again aloud to smile or love
Because you broke me in millions of ways
So I shall inevidably end when push comes to shove
Although you murdered my empty heart
And I dont really understand why
The one i loved so much
Became a seperate and harliquin guy
My life is over and I have to learn to live again
But my wish and curse for you is this
May you live forever showered with anothers love
But may you always remember me and our first kiss
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Re: My last wish for you
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by jada on
Thursday, 30th August 2007 @ 07:48:37 AM AEST
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| hey this was really good. I like what its saying in the 5th stanza!! good work!!!!!!!^___^ |
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Re: My last wish for you
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by JockPhillips on
Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 11:25:57 AM AEST
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| It will get better again too. Staying strong for. |
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