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Splintered Steel

Contributed by Moonshine on Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 07:24:54 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The time I lost the gift of life,
Or taken by the blade of my very own knife?

The essence of life slipping away,
So many nights I have dreamed of this day.

They placed this corpse in a steel box of hell,
They put me where dancing red demons would dwell.
They incinerated me in this still box of hell,
They scorched away this old human shells.

My soul splintered this lustrous steel.
A soul so fiery with infinite zeal.

A metal so strong that it'd never give way,
But I watched as it's alloys all splintered away.

Corroding away the Iron Triad,
Nickel, iron, and cobalt all clad.
Crumbling away at it's own existence,
Having no time to produce a resistance.

Liberation felt so good in those enkindled remains,
Released in the river of eternity,
The purest of water to extinguish the flames.

"I've never felt so alive now that I'm dead"

Rinse away each elemental sliver.
The strength of titanium,
The luster of chromium,
The effect 25 and 74 deliver.

Lavishly intoxicating;
Extravagantly invigorating;
Amazed by the way my mind has been formulating.

Written in 2004

Copyright © Moonshine ... [ 2007-08-29 07:24:54]
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Re: Splintered Steel (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 07:29:34 AM AEST
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Very awesome

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