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I Am Fear
Contributed by
catz77
on
Tuesday, 28th August 2007 @ 08:50:57 PM in AEST
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To all of humanity
I love to see you cry
To see you open yourself to the world
I love how your depression is contagious
How every step you take
Buries you deeper in sorrow
I love to see you drown in me
To know you feel hurt and dazed
To hear you whine and whimper
It makes me content
To see you weak
As I trap you in my grasp
keep it up
as long as i flow
through your mouth
through your heart
through your eyes
I own you.
Copyright ©
catz77
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2007-08-28 20:50:57]
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Re: I Am Fear
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by justagirl82 on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:45:45 AM AEST
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| Harsh words for someone who seems so insecure with themself. Grief/Pain/Hurt is not something another should find so callously funny. "I love to see you cry" I honestly hope no one ever feels like that towards you. |
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Re: I Am Fear
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by justagirl82 on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:47:15 AM AEST
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| Harsh words for someone who seems so insecure with themself. Grief/Pain/Hurt is not something another should find so callously funny. "I love to see you cry" I honestly hope no one ever feels like that towards you. |
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Re: I Am Fear
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by Rylo on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:52:25 AM AEST
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| To be honest with you, this could have been done so much better. I myself seen nothing in here that has anything to do with fear, but someone who is caught up in their own pain. One who is trying to get answers to their own questions within their self. |
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Re: I Am Fear
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 07:34:28 PM AEST
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| This is a piece of perverse poetry. Nothing in it to grasp but the sense of inner fear. If you have problems then do write them all down then try placing things like good health, not in a wheel chair, not a chronic illness against your supposed complaints and see how they balance out. Live your life from bern |
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Re: I Am Fear
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by catz77 on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 12:53:31 PM AEST
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| This is not supposed to be Me wishing hurt on others but what I feel when I fear,... Look at the title please |
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