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A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
Contributed by
Stalkee
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Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Well now goodbye Chet
Though I never really talked to you
You seemed to have an aura around you
That made me want to smile when I saw you
You left behind two kids
When you stepped into your car
Although you never knew it would happen
It did, you didn't make it to work alive
And it seems to me you were best of men
Always seemed to be smiling when I saw you
And I never really knew you, but still I'm sad
You're life, like a piece of string, got cut way too short
Well now goodbye Chet
Though I never really talked to you
It seemed you really did enjoy life
Never seemed to ever be under too much stress
And goodbye Chet
From a young kid, you didn't really know
I just want to say goodbye again
And now I send out my prayers to the kids you left behind
And it seems to me you were best of men
Always seemed to be smiling when I saw you
And I never really knew you, but still I'm sad
You're life, like a piece of string, got cut way too short
Copyright ©
Stalkee
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2003-03-04 08:30:00]
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Re: A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:50:18 AM AEST
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| How very nice of you to write a poem for him,How sad this happened! Nice work! Christina |
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Re: A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:05:40 AM AEST
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For a 14 yr old,your mind is expansive....
Keep writing,and may you always see
the lighted auras surrounding!
Angel always.....Godspeed!!!! 0:-) |
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Re: A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
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by Dot on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:33:52 AM AEST
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| I think this is a super poem and tribute. Dot |
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Re: A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
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by TheSpiritx on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 12:05:29 PM AEST
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Good poem. I am glad this guy gave you such a good impression, but sad his life had to be taken. Things happen all the time, though..
Thanks for the submission - it was thought provoking. |
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Re: A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
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by Apartment213 on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 01:54:11 AM AEST
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| well this is a sad but good poem im sorry about the man who died all life is beautiful |
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Re: A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:54:37 AM AEST
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| very beautiful tribute... blessings... |
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Re: A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
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by banjo on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:14:38 PM AEST
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| I think it's a fine title. And a decent poem. |
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Re: A Piece of String (not a great title, but still read it please!)
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by banjo on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 03:16:59 PM AEST
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| I think it's a fine title. And a decent poem. |
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