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The Return To Innocence
Contributed by
gilbert92
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Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 06:40:55 AM in AEST
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The Return to Innocence
I perceive about the way the world struggles to maintain its balance of good and evil, the balance between purity and tarnish. I close my eyes only to see the stages being set for wars, and innocent blood dripping so casually on city streets. I see the people asking for teachers and no one answering their call. I think of all the people in the world lost in solitude and hatred. I see the mentally ill running around when all they want to do is lay motionless. I see of the young and old who become engulfed in the sensations of addiction. It seems like the world is frigid and it will be for quite a while. I open my eyes only to see watch the nightmares on TV that sing us to sleep, and my mind invokes itself into the warmth of my dreams. The dreams that are the silver hem that hangs so brittly from the heavens of above. If our dreams of pacifism, unconditional love for one another, and eternal happiness came to be, what a world it would be?
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Re: The Return To Innocence
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by thebrokenyouth on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 07:04:10 AM AEST
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it took me a few reads to really understand.
good use of words and great imagery.
i hope im as good as you someday.
keep writing.
i like reading them.
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Re: The Return To Innocence
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 03:43:47 PM AEST
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Awesome truths and awesome writing.
huggs,
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Re: The Return To Innocence
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 07:53:29 AM AEST
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thats why i seldom watch the news, it tends to destroy me for several hours after....
excellent thought provoking write, indeed, why can we not all come together in unconditional love? to live in peace....un fortunatly humans are not by nature that kind, theres always one to get it started all over again...................
love n' hugs nessa |
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