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Hell Yes
Contributed by
Lancaster
on
Saturday, 25th August 2007 @ 07:32:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I experience imaginary conversations with you in my head
You tell me what I want to hear in perfect fragments of speech
Every word is richer then the one previous, or yet to follow
Somewhere in-between irrationality and sanity, void of sexuality, is today
then tomorrow…
To know you is to love you
and to be loved by you is a greater gift
to touch you is sensory taken to sensual myths
to be one with you
where no other exists
Hand in hand we walk the streets guided by the neon lights
laughter comes with no effort
soft whispers of expression
Let loose
Come in
I have come to this realization…
In all likelihood
With high probability
Close proximity
Temporal punctuality
Time is on a sacred mission
Come in
Come early
Nearer to eternity
Forever a possibility
In all likelihood
With sustained possibility
The end approaches
Without me
_______
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Copyright ©
Lancaster
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2007-08-25 07:32:33]
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Re: Hell Yes
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by blissful-ignorance on
Saturday, 25th August 2007 @ 08:07:12 AM AEST
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| thats awesome! i really like it |
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Re: Hell Yes
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by Kayden on
Saturday, 25th August 2007 @ 12:19:24 PM AEST
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| This is very very good. I have never read one like this before. The style and wording is really good. I can tell it took you a long time to come out with this one LOL. I especially liked the wording I am going to have to read it a couple more times to really grasp what is trying to be said. Anyways. Very very well done, this is one of my favorites. |
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