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Late Night Blues
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Thursday, 23rd August 2007 @ 04:22:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Eviscerated is how I feel
Through war I've been
and I've not fared well
in my endeavors.
I bleed for I've the cuts
you have made
that go deeper into the viscera
than any other swordsman has.
These tears seem unending
flood flows and the hour is late
I want to pick up the phone
but I'm too scared to call.
I am lost and so afraid
trying to push my entrails
back in place, weakening from your disease
and nothing seems to fit, anymore.
If I could change things
I would, but I can't
and this pain is becoming
unbearable to withstand.
You, my love have hurt me
so terribly bad
I cannot be mended
I am living in such a state of disarray.
Don't want to believe that I
I may have failed once again
and damn they say third time
is a charm, oh no, not for me.
I am desperate in these late hours
So close to just giving up
I don't know where to begin
or where to end this, anymore...
8/23-07
Laura Howell Horner
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2007-08-23 16:22:13]
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Re: Late Night Blues
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd August 2007 @ 04:53:37 PM AEST
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Oh sis,
this is so sad, right to the end of the earth, even the shadows feel this sis.
I am to take it that you are home alone with kids?? God I hope not....... I will be givin ya a call soon.
I am short of a basket case lately and have avoided talking cause Im nuts lol...
I will pull it together and call you ..
Im worried about you pm me please and tell me whats going on??
hugs
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Re: Late Night Blues
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by Crow on
Thursday, 23rd August 2007 @ 05:06:55 PM AEST
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| Laura...I`ll just tell you I`m here,,if you need to talk.. your a kind and beautiful woman...and my friend I`m happy to say..Vincent |
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Re: Late Night Blues
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 07:05:06 AM AEST
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Laura i feel your pain here, and thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece with us all,
whenever the shadows come just remember that the true beauty is inside you, always be happy for what you have.....breath!!
great post!
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Re: Late Night Blues
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 01:44:20 PM AEST
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(((((Laura))))) I'm so sorry for your what your going through but don't give up, your poems are our saviour and some may even learn and think twice before inflicting the unforgivable wretched pain that you have gone through, you of all people on here should not have had this happen.
peace to you and your children my sister . . .
Ben . . . |
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Re: Late Night Blues
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by thumper on
Saturday, 25th August 2007 @ 07:06:03 AM AEST
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The imagery is vivid, lasting. The pain you express reaches out and touches the reader. I feel for you. Hope your life gets better soon. Good write. Kudos!
Peace
Thumper :o) |
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