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Magic Garden
Contributed by
FallenNeko
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Thursday, 23rd August 2007 @ 09:10:10 AM in AEST
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The whispers in the garden,
The wind upon my face,
I love the life and music that surrounds this place
The scent of roses,
The trail of tears,
Surrounds this garden and everything here.
The twilight of daybreak,
The dawn of nightfall,
Blankets this haven wall to wall.
The eyelids fall short,
And the breathing doth slow,
The peace has been made
Like new-fallen snow
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2007-08-23 09:10:10]
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Re: Magic Garden
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by endlesspath on
Thursday, 23rd August 2007 @ 12:02:16 PM AEST
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seems if it is what the title says, a magic garden.....could be hope
faith
not what you would say heaven
but more of a screne place
somewhere you can dream and become
things go correctly
i hope its life got you
and not death
very becoming, write
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Re: Magic Garden
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 11:30:40 PM AEST
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I like what endless said ...
yes seems to me, this is more like an earthly paradise where
all is serene and quiet enough to dream a poet's dream. It's
a beautiful and softly calming piece. Like the soul of an innocent . . .
beautiful ~
~Breezy |
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