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A Moment
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 12:19:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I want to stop time for a moment
A moment for me to really look into you
A moment for me to be in your arms
A moment for me to stay close to you
I couldn’t understand why
I couldn’t understand how
Why I have fallen for you
How you have captured my heart
Is this all a dream?
Is this all just some imagination in my mind?
It took me a second to fall in love with you
A moment to find out we were so far apart
A moment to know my dreams remained just dreams
A moment to realize all that
And yet I wish for time to stop
So I could be in your arms even for a moment
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funnyface09
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2007-08-21 12:19:09]
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Re: A Moment
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 12:25:01 PM AEST
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| I liked the use of repetition here, as it really helped in establishing the poem's pacing and adding to the emotions that you were writing about. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: A Moment
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by Mila on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 05:43:12 PM AEST
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| Very nice writing, i like your style!!!! |
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Re: A Moment
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by Karlee14 on
Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 06:26:56 AM AEST
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I definately sense your emotions throughout the poem.
And all though I could sense the pain you are/were going through.
It was a very calm, lulling poem.
Take Care,
Karlee |
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