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Premonition . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 07:58:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A
premonition
i did have about my destiny,
to full fruition love would bloom
somewhere at twenty
three.
'Twas
perhaps a wishful thought
as far as wishes go,
for how does one prepare them selves?
to love another
so.
I
was but a wanderer
akin to waisted
ease,
soon to meet the ponderer
who would take me to my
knees.
The
one who knew
the heart of me
in every small
detail,
soon
to
touch that part of me
a woman know's is
frail.
Oh!
and could she touch me now
with her intended way,
for more than just a visit
this women planned to
stay.
Her wanting eyes
and tender kiss were all
my heart could see,
enchanted by her fragile bliss
love saturated
me.
Ben
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Re: Premonition . . . Ben
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by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 11:21:17 AM AEST
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what a nice one too and to see that at 23 , just wow how my heart wants to see what yours did, but 5 yrs older maybe it will, just maybe. beauty and wonderdous write.
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Re: Premonition . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 11:45:24 AM AEST
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| The thought creates the reality truly speaks up here. Your thought of a wonderous love has manifested indeed. Well done my friends as always. |
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Re: Premonition . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 12:16:02 PM AEST
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| Another wonderful write Ben |
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Re: Premonition . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 03:14:23 PM AEST
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Delightful read as always Ben.
I got your pm, I am fine just alot of crap going on...... Such is life but no need for you to worry
thanks for being you
Michelle |
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Re: Premonition . . . Ben
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by Adreana on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 01:41:33 AM AEST
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| As usual, Beauifantasticalientexcellent! :) Your writing always brings some kind of feeling to my otherwise drab day at work :P |
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Re: Premonition . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 07:07:46 AM AEST
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the thing about your poetry is that it is ever a wonder to read, to savor each message and thought... far lesser poets would be repetitive ~yet when reading you i never tire; for there is always a hope of heart and twinkle in the soul...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Premonition . . . Ben
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 08:25:40 AM AEST
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Another beautiful masterpiece
dripping with gorgeously woven
words from your beautiful loving
heart. I never tire from reading
your fantastic romantic writes
my dear friend. I'm always
guaranteed a smile visiting
your glorious pages. Well done
and thanks for sharing your
beautiful poetry with us.
huge hugs your fan,
dreamer |
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Re: Premonition . . . Ben
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by outlawpoet on
Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 03:10:34 PM AEST
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first i think the only way you can prepair yourself to love another is to love everyone. second great poem i like it i liked the form keep it up.
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