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A doubtful soul
Contributed by
wordsy
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Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 11:03:25 PM in AEST
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To reap the tears
Of sorrows sown
And regrets that lie in wait
And feel the pain
The cause my own
Born there in my hate
Forever’s promise
Forgotten vows
Faded now by years
Jaded deep in ignorance hue
An wrought by fabled fears
And the dreams once lost in sleepless nights
And the lessons they do teach
Are hidden within this wakeful void
And are far beyond my reach
So there to force the issues
The ones that I must face
To take me from my isle of thoughts
And put me in my place
To see that I should tow the line
So be it now the case
To seek the reasons
Why I cry
For the cause of the human race
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wordsy
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2007-08-20 23:03:25]
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Re: A doubtful soul
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 01:59:57 AM AEST
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Wow, this was so very soulful. You write so much from your heart, I enjoyed this read and just fell in love with the ending stanza.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: A doubtful soul
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 04:00:45 AM AEST
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| A beautiful sad and soulful write. It is so well written. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sue x |
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Re: A doubtful soul
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 03:18:19 AM AEST
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so touching and beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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