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Try Again Later
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 04:43:03 AM in AEST
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Too many times I've lied awake
While Feeling my heart slowly break
Too many times I've sat and cried
While trying to figure out why others have lied
I've looked for that one that can't be found
Then I buried him underground
After him all I found was pain
Men who were cruel, hollow, and vain
Making it hard to place any faith
Despite the mask of an angelic face
So I'm sorry if I seem lacking in trust
That proving to me you care is a must
Before I'll even give you a chance
But I'm tired of doing the broken heart dance
I'm tired of trusting people like you
That hurt me once and came back for round two
So prove to me that this time you care
Show me some real emotion is there
If there is a difference I'll be glad
To give you a second chance at my hand
But if there isn't, make no mistake
This time my heart's a bit harder to break
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2007-08-20 04:43:03]
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Re: Try Again Later
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by SPOKENWORDARTIST on
Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 04:57:42 AM AEST
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VERY NICE WRITE.
STRENGTH IS A CHARACTER MOST MEN LIKE THAT HATE BECASUE THE KNOW IT OVER BECASUE YOU SEE RIGHT THROUGH THEM BUT STAY STRONG. |
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Re: Try Again Later
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 11:36:38 AM AEST
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Hey sweetie.
I'm so sorry you have to go through this stuff, things will get better... it all happens for a reason.
You know, holding back a bit and not completely giving yourself over to trust is sometimes a good thing. I've seen you upset over guys before, and this shows a more mature side of you, sis. Don't give in, bit don't give up, ok?
I really like this.
Love ya.
*hugs*
Phil xxx
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Re: Try Again Later
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by endlesspath on
Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 12:14:29 PM AEST
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well if they have done it once , why wouldnt they do it again.? i think we give and give, but its time to say i have given, if not enough go on. move on to another, there are so many fish in the sea, and some whom really mean what they say. i know i am waiting for that one to be nothing else.
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Re: Try Again Later
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 20th August 2007 @ 03:35:14 PM AEST
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Oh Sweetei,
I have no doubt of your strength, my young sister. You are such an intelligent young women. Follow your heart and soul.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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