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Spoiled Dinner
Contributed by
zenith66
on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:00:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Pristine glasses lay in perfect lines,
Forks and spoons beside unopened wines,
Gleaming plates of chicken legs
And marinated breast,
Oozing bowls of cream gateaux’s
With hint of lemon zest..
Unfilled stomachs sprawled across immaculate floors
Someone’s kicked the hinges through the door!!
And sirens pierce the peaceful summer night,
Red and blue revolving lights…
Copyright ©
zenith66
... [
2007-08-19 12:00:01]
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Re: Spoiled Dinner
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by flamingblade on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 05:04:36 PM AEST
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Dark...very nice
i think its pretty awesome
and, okay, maybe just a LITTLE freaky,but oh well
well done!
hope to see more of your work
Alex |
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Re: Spoiled Dinner
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 11:35:50 PM AEST
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Holy HECK!!!! lol
Good grief this was DARK. Damn dark. I love the way you
described the table and then the interruption without ever
really going into serious detail. It adds to the shock value.
My friend .. sometimes you scare me. lol
excellent post!
~Breezy |
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