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Kaleidoscope . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 05:43:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My
kaleidoscope of love you are
before my very eyes,
an aray of constant beauty that keep's me
hypnotised.
Your
ever chainging colors
bring sweetness to my life,
to an artist your a masterpeice
to me you are my
wife.
A
pallet of divinty
revealing every hue,
such justice to a canvas
your loveliness would
do.
No other have i love'd as much
untill you came along,
they may have been a melody
but your the total
song.
I love you with a passion
that paralizes me,
for you are the embodiment
of my whole
sanity.
My
kaleidoscope of love
so stunning is your view,
you define prefectipn
by simply being
you.
Ben
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Re: Kaleidoscope . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 08:30:15 AM AEST
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Oh Brother Ben, that was so lovely...flowed so nicely. Your writes make me feel happy when I read them. Thank you once again, for sharing your love.
Peace and hugs,
Sister Laura |
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Re: Kaleidoscope . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 09:34:46 PM AEST
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This was lovely Ben, such wonderful rhythm and imagery. I really like the idea of love being this all encompassing spectrum, I think you've hit a truth there!
A beautifully touching write,
Dom |
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Re: Kaleidoscope . . . Ben
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by Adreana on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 05:59:23 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, Dahling. Makes my heart go "pitter patter". Wonderfully written. I expected nothing less :) |
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Re: Kaleidoscope . . . Ben
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by endlesspath on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 01:10:05 PM AEST
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the essance of love for one
such beauty
simpleness
hope
and 200% of all
your words give "love" hope
endless |
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Re: Kaleidoscope . . . Ben
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by ATG on
Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 02:36:19 PM AEST
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| Pardon me but... bloody hell... That was deep... you sound like one of the 'lucky' people... I like this.. It makes me smile. Peace. |
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