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Forgotten dreams
Contributed by
wordsy
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Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 10:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It would seem I disturbed the slumber
Of my long forgotten dreams
And there I purged the darkest depths
To find what there remains
Of all that’s left of yesteryear
Within the jaded light
And all that’s gone
For oh so long
And faded from my sight
And so I seek the solitude
I find so very rare
And sought out thoughts
With which were wrought
From lack of love and care
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2007-08-16 22:25:24]
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Re: Forgotten dreams
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 01:07:06 AM AEST
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| well written..wish it was a lil more moving...good overall. |
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Re: Forgotten dreams
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 01:13:12 AM AEST
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Oh my oh my ... wordsy .. DAMN!!! This was like an arrow through
my very own heart. Yes ... forgotten dreams .. oh how WONDERFULLY
well you describe them!
perfectly written, my friend .... though almost painful to read ~
~Breezy
(remembering ....) |
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Re: Forgotten dreams
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 03:23:30 AM AEST
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Excellent write. Your name "wordsy" fits you well, me thinks *smiles*. Painful in meaning, your write was, but beautiful in it's rhythmic, poetic flow.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Forgotten dreams
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by Chrissylee on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 06:24:19 PM AEST
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| so simple the words but oh how they beat out a fantastic tune as always wordsy well done!! |
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Re: Forgotten dreams
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by endlesspath on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 12:43:17 PM AEST
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yes your words complete :you
your writes always leave the reader something to think about .
wonderful write, i love reading your work
endless |
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