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Let my tears stream down for her.......
Contributed by
ravisada
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Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 05:31:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How do I tell you about my love that I had with her
She was like an angel who walked beside me
She was the star that shined deeply in my heart
She was my life and my dreams of future
No one knows what stored in my heart for her
My love for her, is beyond what words can say
Her love played with me like the strings of a violin
and it gave me a pleasure of unconditional love
She was everything to me like a sun in the sky
Her love can not be matched with anything in this world
Now she's no longer with me, left this world for good
The heaven has stolen her from me but not from my soul
Life without her nothing but a pain in my heart and soul
Without her love is living like a prisoner in my own life
Her love will be remembered with me till my end
Till then let my tears stream down my face forever for her.
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2007 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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Re: Let my tears stream down for her.......
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 01:39:58 AM AEST
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| ya closing lines are good... |
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Re: Let my tears stream down for her.......
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by Rosewing on
Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 01:43:31 AM AEST
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| love the line living like a prisoner in my own life good work Very poignant |
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Re: Let my tears stream down for her.......
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by mooshken26 on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 02:12:53 PM AEST
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Its a beautiful poem of a love now lost - thank you for sharing
Its nice to see poetry from fellow Sri Lankans. |
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