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Beyond The Bell
Contributed by
trueecho
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Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 04:00:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There are people who seem to understand the whole she-bang
I am not one of them
Show me a man at the mercy of nature
Just like me
Find me the poorest man in the world
I will follow him
I will hold him
He is my saviour
How many chances will i get? One a day.
The question "Why am i here?"
Only yields light next to "as opposed to there"
Using love as your compass
Finding consistency in a life of transformation
A flickering flame will only stand still if you see it in a picture.
Copyright ©
trueecho
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2007-08-16 04:00:09]
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Re: Beyond The Bell
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by zenmind on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 06:42:04 AM AEST
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Wow, excellent deep, spiritual poem. This reminds me of a lot of the stuff Jesus said in the New Testament. The poor man, the one with no attachments, is truly the richest man. I love the underlying feeling of love in this poem. And i thought it was interesting that in the beginning you say that you are not a person who seems to understand "the whole she-bang", yet from the wisdom you expressed in this poem, you obviously know more than you know.
Wisdom is different than knowledge. Wisdom is inherently a part of everyone in the deepest part of themselves. Knowledge is something that we have to learn, it is outside of ourselves, we accumulate knowledge throughout our entire live, whereas wisdom is already within us.
Be True,
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Re: Beyond The Bell
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by Adreana on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 07:19:01 AM AEST
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I really like this piece. Very strong. Good work!
~Adreana |
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