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Your Turn To Hang.
Contributed by
GemmaLouiseRose
on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 02:57:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I told you things..
so many truths,
never said in such ways before..
things that wrenched the very heart
of which they were born..
drenched the lips
of which they poured...
i discarded my pride
so that you could see truth.
gods honest truth.
Im always hanging...
am i not?
never knowing, how you feel..
about how i feel..
like your hiding..
but i hide nothing.
i am nothing but a lonely seeker..
but
are 'no' words.....
really better than your words?
ill never know... youll never tell me.
and so i hang..
i hang on.
But when will you start hanging.
Copyright ©
GemmaLouiseRose
... [
2007-08-16 02:57:50]
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Re: Your Turn To Hang.
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 04:23:49 AM AEST
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| I like it alot. I know what it's like far too well. Very nicely expressed. |
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Re: Your Turn To Hang.
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by Torn_Thomas on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 04:42:33 AM AEST
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a beautiful pool of regret and emotion! wonderful.
Thomas |
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Re: Your Turn To Hang.
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 11:56:42 AM AEST
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i wanted to check out your work and i had a feeling it would pay off, this is devistatingly
honest, and inescapable to whom ever it was aimed at. i love the way it slowly unfolds
into a interogative stand off.
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Re: Your Turn To Hang.
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by Rylo on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:28:41 AM AEST
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| Great poem, yet it happens so much. Men never opening up to the one they love. Meanwhile the women tell all. |
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Re: Your Turn To Hang.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 12th March 2008 @ 12:53:06 AM AEST
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As so often , I was drawn to this by the title.
I'm glad I was drawn, it held me throughout.
Nice write
Steve |
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