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Is It So Important?
Contributed by
xXdeadXpoetXx
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Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 12:47:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Is it so important?
Must you embrace?
I don't understand
The look on your face
It's not a religion
That's holding me back
It's the fact I'm not shallow
And don't care about that
I want a relationship
An emotional bond
If it were much different
It all would be wrong
Why is it important?
A matter of trust?
We've been close for a while
I just dont understand much?
I guess not, I'm clueless
Why do you care
Let me keep on all
The clothes that I wear
Can't you be happy
With a hug and a kiss
I don't get why it has to be
Much more than this
Maybe I'm scared
And maybe that's all
Of the fact at this; our
Relationship will fall
Or maybe I'm missing
Out on the world
The fact that we can't be
A boy and a girl
We have to be one
For some stupid reason
It's not that you're shallow
It's just not my season
I'm sorry I can't just
Give myself up
Maybe it's true
It's a matter of trust
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Re: Is It So Important?
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 01:48:14 AM AEST
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I think I get your drift here. I say, be strong and stand your ground. Do not do anything you are not ready to do. You must be comfortable with your decisions, do not do something you may later regret. If your "friend" can't deal with that, they're not really your friend. Know what I mean. Be yourself and do what YOU want. Only YOU can control YOU. I wish you luck and strength. Being young, ain't easy. (getting older is not much easier either) *wink*
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: Is It So Important?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 01:52:14 AM AEST
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| Yes it is very important. The first love or if it comes to that the last love it is your body and yours alone. Do not be pressurised into doing what you perhaps are not ready for. Keep smiling bern. |
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Re: Is It So Important?
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by Asthenia on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 07:04:22 AM AEST
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Hey, I hear this write. So many people in the world are only in a relationship for the physical reasons, they only want to "get some." It's encouraging to know that I'm not alone in wanting something much more and greater out of a relationship. Stay grounded in what you believe :)
Great write by the way |
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Re: Is It So Important?
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 07:57:06 PM AEST
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| Well put and yes stand your ground. Love should be first well planted in your heart. Time nurtures and those who are there in the name of love are willing to wait. Great write. |
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Re: Is It So Important?
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by wordsy on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 10:31:30 PM AEST
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A well worded weaving.
as always,
wordsy. |
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