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Forbidden, So wrong, So right
Contributed by
goodandevil
on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 10:00:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The incandescent glow of your eyes in moonlight
The softness in the curves of your back
The way you grip my hand so tight
Forbidden, So wrong, So right
The irritatingly wonderful way you like to fight
The brush of your hair against my face
The way our passion ignites at night
Forbidden, So wrong, So right
This affair can not go past tonight
I miss your scent, your kiss, your smile
I loved you from first sight
Forbidden, So wrong, So right
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2007-08-15 10:00:45]
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Re: Forbidden, So wrong, So right
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 01:17:38 PM AEST
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Beautiful wording. Sad ending to what sounded like a fiery relationship.
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: Forbidden, So wrong, So right
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by Asthenia on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 02:40:03 AM AEST
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This was absolutely gorgeous, great choice of words and I liked the rhyme scheme. It is sad that it had to end the way it did!
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