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Contributed by
Lucrecia
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Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 05:52:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He’s like a bad scar that won’t go away
Everytime you see him its like why do you stay
I hate you but I love you it’s all the same
Would it matter if I died in a blink of an eye?
Left you scared with no remoist to finish yo life
Even though I love you it’s all the same like ping pong on a stormy night.
It was over when I opened my eyes
Not knowin what happened so I just cried
You tellin me it was all just a lie?
Copyright ©
Lucrecia
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2007-08-15 05:52:09]
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Re: Us.
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by Asthenia on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 09:56:08 AM AEST
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"like ping pong on a stormy night"
Very original, I've never heard that simile.
I liked this poem, you got the point across and it's very real...good job! |
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Re: Us.
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 09:40:18 AM AEST
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Even though I love you it’s all the same like ping pong on a stormy night
just absolutely love this line!!!!
i feel the raw hurt in this poem and i can certainly relate! |
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