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Eternal Desire
Contributed by
sixthjan
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Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 08:26:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ssh …
… Close those blinds... and burn the candle lights...
I want to make this fantasy further right
I waited too long...for this passionate night
Don’t stop me now... don’t put up a fight...
This carnal desire inside me…will not slow.
I want to proceed… I want to further grow.
I want to be possessed by you..
..making me sweat profusely in every show.
I want your every breath shared with mine
I want that heavenly touch completely inter twined..
I want to shiver as you run your palm across my face..
I want your warm body holding me to my place...
Defuse my head and kick starting my heart.
I want u to burn through me like a dry tequila shot.
I want to melt you heart to quench my throat.
Like a hundred dying men
I shall wait for those luscious lips to collide with mine..
…making me only one the true envy of time.
I want my pulse to race as I untie your hair
As it fall across your shoulders and on my chest
I want you to entice me to lead this holy quest...
Bind me in a spell with mesmerizing eyes and magic hips..
I want to worship you till the point of no return...
Drugged in a trance like state I would go to very unknown
Running my tongue…accompanied with my lips to every inch.
Starting with your face... those eyes, ears… lips to cheeks...
From finger tips to shoulder blades and further more
Down your spine... those roaring hips and those gentle toes..
I'd like to go on till I conquer you all
Leaving no spot unturned, touch every thing big or small
Do you want me to stop... do you want me to go...
I don’t intend to listen….
...I am the Teaser of the mind ...& The Pirate of the Soul.
Copyright©2007 Shivraj Rajaram
Copyright ©
sixthjan
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2007-08-14 20:26:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Eternal Desire
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 02:27:53 PM AEST (User
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Holy crap....I'm sitting in front of the air conditioner and I'm finding the need to fan myself. This was wonderfully erotic....beautiful...leading up to final ecstasy. Wow...The ending got me, man...
"I am the Teaser of the mind...& The Pirate of the Soul"
Oh Yeah? Sweet. *smiles*Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
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Re: Eternal Desire
(User Rating: 1 ) by sixthjan on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 03:54:01 PM AEST (User
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Thanks.. dear...
:) I did get that response from a few when i sent to them directly via email..
but from a total stranger.. hmm.. nice to know the words work... :)
thanks.. truly obliged...
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