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The Spring Of A Gentle Season . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 12:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A
kiss and some coffee
and day dreams to share
my heart
over flowing with
you,
a
hug and a smile
with touches too spare
no telling what love can
do.
Moments and hours
of rainbows and flowers
falling in love with such ease,
your kisses were warm as a
summer storm caressing
magnolia
trees.
'Twas in the spring
of a gentle season two lovers
danced by the sea, you gave my heart
but plenty of reason for dancing
inside of
me.
The sight of you was enchanting
a treat for myne eyes no less,
'twas no disguizing
such vague tantalizing
displaying your feminine
finess.
A
beauty you were
beyond belief
touching my soul at it's
core,
to what did i owe your loving me so
like no one had love'd me
before.
What was it about you
these eyes of mine saw as though
you were studying me, my female da vince
sculpting my heart into our sweet
destiny.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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2007-08-14 12:33:56]
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Re: The Spring Of A Gentle Season . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 02:19:58 AM AEST
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Brother Ben, This had a wonderful flow. Like running and skipping hand in hand in love...kinda flow. I love how your writes make me feel. Your love flows from your words and touches those that are lucky enough to get to read them. Thank you.
Peace, love and hugs,
Sister Laura |
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Re: The Spring Of A Gentle Season . . . Ben
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 03:45:16 AM AEST
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| I wondered why your name was portrayed all over the show... but then i read this and knew, you have a right to be proud, and if thats not the case, it should be x |
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Re: The Spring Of A Gentle Season . . . Ben
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by Adreana on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 05:25:03 AM AEST
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It amazes me how smooth your work is. It flows beautifully and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I LOVE your work!! Can't wait for more!
Peace OUT!
~Adreana |
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Re: The Spring Of A Gentle Season . . . Ben
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 11:09:18 AM AEST
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well done
love the way this flows.... |
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Re: The Spring Of A Gentle Season . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 07:38:06 AM AEST
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this poem brings such a smile to my heat, i felt like this about the love of my life as well, my only regret is he could not stay on this earth and share more time with me, but in your poetry i relive so many wonderful exilerating feelings! thank you for being a poet that writes from the heart; who touches the very core of his readers with the life he shares with his own truelove,
love n' hugs nessa |
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