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futile rage
Contributed by
Torn_Thomas
on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 09:46:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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These imbeciles surround me
they can't appreciate the anger i feel towards thee
towards myself for letting you go
They'll never know!
how could they?
"I've lost a love" they say in jest
"it's not that bad!" then why my chest?
do you burn and pound and cause unrest
"you're gone!" i cry
inside my mind
and if i checked i'm sure i'd find
you're happy
you've got a new man
I'd slice his throat on demand
and feel his blood run down my sleeve
as i probed with my thumb to make him bleed
but no i sit here on my bar stool
and smile and joke and play the fool
surrounded by these moronic tools
who claim to know how i feel for you.
Copyright ©
Torn_Thomas
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2007-08-14 09:46:49]
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Re: futile rage
(User Rating: 1 )
by Gdo on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 12:33:57 PM AEST
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| I like it a lot. |
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Re: futile rage
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 02:27:44 AM AEST
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I like your name Torn Thomas. Drew me to read you, and I'm glad it did. I know this feeling, I'm sure many of us can relate. You've written about these feelings well. Damn, how we torture ourselves. Take care.
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: futile rage
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 06:46:50 AM AEST
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Not many poets on here i really admire, i admire you from the very 1st poems youve posted!!
i just love them x |
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